Monday, 7 March 2011
Cultural Diversity
Diversity means the state or fact of being diverse; difference; unlikeness. For example, cultural diversity is difference culture, unlikeness or human can be diversity or food,... It is very important to respect diversity because we counld learn a lot from those cultural diversity. They can help us, we can know each other clearer. The communities between those cultural diversity with our country can help us avoid war or prevent war. About politic, the piplomacy between us and cultural diversity help us be better such as trade, co-operation, so this will improve our country, our techniques,... If people on the world don't respect cultural diversity, some terrible things may happen such as war. People don't know each other much and people are not very friendly, so war can easily happen. If now people don't respect cultural diversity, people won't help each other when people have problems such as about economy, army, poor people... We don't have much knowledges about every countries's culture and we cannot co-operate together. So respect cultural diversity can help us a lot but if now we don't respect anymore, the world might change and war happen, so that why it is important.
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I think my word choice is not quite good, because I don't really good at vocabularies. My Sentence fluency is not good and it is not bad. Because some of my sentences are not in the right place but I think most of the sentences are good.